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Hey Little Sister Who's The One You Want?

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Continued from fav.me/dbrj9wv

I am not sure how much more I can take of this. I’ve been Goliath’s prisoner for hours now, and with each of those passing hours he demonstrates more creativity in making me suffer. It started off with a flogging, escalated to breath play, and then things have slowly gotten worse from there.


I am now kneeling naked before him, my body glistening with sweat. The room is stifling, and the air is completely still.  Gawd, is it too much to ask to have just a little breeze?

 

My ordeals thus far have been very physically demanding, and my thirst has become almost unbearable. It is an understatement to say that I am miserable.

“Tell me what I want to know,” he demands. “Tell me Bardak’s weaknesses. His secrets. Tell me or I will make what you have experienced up until now seem like nothing.”

“I don’t know,” I plead. “I don’t know any more about him than I’ve see on television! I’ve never even met General Bardak. I swear!”

“Do not lie to me,” the giant of a man roars. “You bear his mark on your breast!  I know you are his lover. His whore!”

He grabs me by the throat and pulls my face inches away from his. His breath smells of whiskey.


My wrists are manacled behind my back, and his grip is so strong I cannot breathe.  I struggle ineffectively unable to control the rising panic within me.

“Everyone knows you are his woman,” he hisses. “Everyone,” he screams as he roughly pushes me away and I fall to my knees at his feet, gasping for air!

“I’ll never betray Alvaro,” I say defiantly. “Never”, I say!

“Oh you will not only tell me everything I want to know about your beloved, but you will tell me those things only you have knowledge of.  Things that I would not even know to ask. Then you will take your rightful place at my feet as my toy.”

“You are delusional. I’ll bust your balls,” I say venomously!

“I am going to derive great pleasure in breaking you,” he smiles, his voice like a snake. “You can already feel it can’t you? How far you’ve already slipped. How close to the edge you are. How close you are to being lost and becoming nothing more than my property.”

Despite my overheated body and the high room temperature, a cold chill passes through me with his words and a shiver runs down my spine.

“Yes, you do feel it, I can tell,” he says as he takes a knee in front of me and grasps my face looking into my eyes. All I can think of is a line from the movie Jaws. Something about having black eyes. A doll’s eyes.

“I am going to have my revenge on Bardak,” his voice calming. “I will have my revenge and you are going to make it possible.”

“You are deranged,” I reply, my mouth dry.

Ignoring my feeble insult he continues. “Bardak will come for you. He will. I know his type. He will come, and this time I am ready for him. I have trained. I have undergone enhancements that make me bigger, far stronger, faster, and more durable than him. He will come for you, and I will destroy him.”

“Please,” I beg. “Don’t do this. Whatever your grievance, don’t do this. I’ll be your woman. I’ll be your whore. I’ll be your slave. Just spare Alvaro.”

“You will be all those things anyway,” he answers. I will have your beloved in chains watching as I ravage you. Break you. Tame you. Then when you willingly give yourself to me, it will break his spirit. When that happens, I will finish him off.”

Suddenly the door explodes inward, and Alvaro steps into the room.

My tormentor does not seem alarmed, and he is actually smiling as he stands upright and turns to face my General. His confidence frightens me, and I worry for my lover’s safety.

“We meet again Bardak,” the monster says in a cliché’. “Much sooner than I expected perhaps, but that just means I will have to wait no longer for my vengeance.”

Alvaro looks at me our eyes locked. His are angry and his muscles tense as I see rage building up inside him.

“You have one chance to surrender and release her, Goliath!” he says to the man mountain towering over me.

Alvaro looks so small now that I see the two of them in the same room, and I tremble in….fear? Anticipation?

My captor makes the first offensive move, which Alvaro deftly evades, countering with a blow that would shatter a cinder block. Instead of going down however the eight foot monster just grunts, and backhands Bardak, sending him flying across the room.

“I’m going to squash you like the bug you are…” he says confidently advancing on him as Bardak rises to his feet.

“A bug?” Bardak replies his voice tight with anger as he glances at me and then refocuses on his opponent. “At least I don’t have the brain and muscles of a bug…”

Goliath then roars and charges at my man like a bull, and Bardak drops to the floor balancing on his left hand, his leg kicking out like a piston striking the larger man’s knee. His opponent staggers but does not fall, and he roars in anger and pain.

”I will break you in two!!!” Goliath threatens. He is standing unsteadily, his leg obviously damaged.

“I seriously doubt that…” Bardak replies, as he darts in low and close to his opponent.”

“Nooooo,” I scream in fear, worried that my beloved is too close and the giant will have him in his grasp crushing him.

My fears are unwarranted though as his powerful legs launch him upward, and both of Bardak’s fists hammer Goliath’s jaw taking him several inches off of his feet, and dropping him to the floor.

“Whatever you have done to her, I’ll repay you back tenfold!!” Bardak promises, as he follows through with a powerful downward blow to the monster’s face.

My heart is pounding in my chest like a jackhammer, and I feel stirrings within me as my General presses his advantage.

“I will not be denied, my revenge,” Goliath gasps, blood flowing from his now broken nose.

“You will” Bardak hits him in his face again, “never hurt her,” Bardak hits him yet again, “EVER AGAIN,” he repeats as he delivers the finishing blow to the side of the behemoth’s neck disrupting the carotid artery and blood flow to his opponent’s brain.

As Goliath falls, Alvaro lifts me into his powerful arms. “Are you okay my love,” he asks? His muscular body is comforting, and the musky-manly smell makes my head spin.

“I’ll be okay now,” I assure him. “Now that you have saved me.”

“I will always be there for you Joelle,” he promises.

“I know,” I reply. “You’ve always…,” my reply is cut short by the deep, sensual kiss my General gives me.

TO BE CONTINUED. . .



General Bardak is the property of :iconatomskmaster6: and operates in :iconangel-fallsda:
This story is a collaborative project, with 
:iconatomskmaster6: to whom I thank for editing & smoothing out the General's dialog.  


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